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I grunt as I attempt to stand up. Why can’t I?
“Ashley? Are you- AHHHHHHH! BOWSER! RUN!” A familiar voice shrieked.
“Tim? Where are you? Are you okay? Wait, Bowser? EEP!” Another familiar voice, is that Jake? His voice came from a koopa now hiding in its shell.
“Bowser? Where is he? I want to meet him!”
“Wait, Ashley? Is that you?” Tim asked “BWAHAHAHA!”
“What’s so funny?” I ask.
“It’s you! You’re Bowser!” Jake chuckled as he came out of his shell.
“I am? Awesome! Well, Jake the koopa, Tim the magickoopa, what are we supposed to do?”
“I’ll tell you!” The Italian plumber shouts as he enters.
“Kill Mario?” Jake asks.
I shoot a fireball at Mario, which he dodges.  I jump, but he dodges again, and goes for the big red button. Luckily Tim teleports and grabs him, bringing him to the other end of the room. I dodge a bunch of fireballs, and a mental message passes between Jake and me. I jump up, and Mario runs under me, so focused on avoiding me, he doesn’t see Jake coming right at him in his shell. They collide, and Mario loses his fire power. Tim grabs Mario, and I shoot a fireball at him, effectively making him small. When Tim drops him, he creates a barrage of goombas to surround Mario.
That’s the end of that, and we all black out.
Karts, Koopas, fans in stands, MARIO KART! I wear a blue dress and have a luma flying around me. Hannah is also there, wearing an orange biking outfit, and behind her is Justin with a red shit and overalls, next to Doug with overalls and a green shirt. Skyler hangs above us on a cloud, holding a fishing rod.
“Huh?” Skyler asks. “I guess it’s time to start the race!” She hangs a light down.
“AND THEY’RE OFF! Luigi takes the lead, followed by Rosalina, Daisy, and Mario drags behind.” The announcer shouts. “And here comes the first set of item blocks! Luigi throws a banana in Rosalina’s path, but she swerves around it! Daisy sends a blooper out to cover everyone- but what was THAT!? Looks like Mario got a star and stole the lead from Luigi! And there goes Rosalina, right off the edge into the swirling water! Now she’s back in last place, with Daisy in first!  On to the second lap! Rosalina has gone on a rampaging frenzy with a bullet bill, and steals the lead! Third lap, and it’s Mario at front, closely followed by Rosalina, then Daisy, and Luigi! And Daisy finally finds the shortcut!! Almost there! It’s Daisy! It’s Luigi! It’s too close to tell! It’ll be a photo finish..!”
Yay! I won! I stood on the top platform with a gold medal, Hannah had a silver, Doug stood (Somewhat) proud with a bronze, and Justin stood off to the side, kicking dust.
“Congratulations, all! You may go home now!” And that was the sad end of our fun.
I quickly typed up what I could remember, sorry this wasn't as good :/
But new chapter, finally!
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Artist
Leminz Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice chapter
MrsOmNom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MsBowser Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks for putting me in this. i love how you put me in here and its 11 days before my b day. :D
MrsOmNom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, I love making people happy!
Happy early birthday!
MsBowser Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
thank you i will be 14
fluttershyyay Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ashley: well that was easy

It was. really.
Also good story so far he he :3
MrsOmNom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finally, Bowser wins!!

thelizzerd Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
MrsOmNom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, it was better the first time :/
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